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Submitted: October 8, 2011
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first anthro how did i doby ~nyan-husky

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I think its FINE for a first try. please critique. and by tits are not that big anyways so yeah.

Critique by ~Lookiosushi Jan 19, 2012, 6:09:45 PM

First critique so here it goes

Hm this is nice overall

good pose and all, but it looks like she has one arm

you need to watch out for that kind of thing when you drawing anthro

and it looks like she's sitting on her tail

the butt should touch the ground, not the tail

and your hand isn't leveled with your feet

make sure you work on that okay hun?

and it kinda looks as if she has one boob

when you draw breasts, make sure you draw circles when you draw the sketch

overall nice work for a first try~

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Critique by ~Hevsicles Oct 10, 2011, 3:01:44 PM

It seems that you were trying to go for a Cartoony style (correct me if I am wrong, please) Which turned out quite well. But, the hands, torso, back and chest could use work. The fingers look like a bunch of round white balls lined up in a row, the tail looks flat, the torso looks flat too and the chest could use some better anatomy and the back looks off. The shading is fine, although for better impact maybe try some more detailed shading. The ears look a bit off and the nose is a bit lopsided. The feet look nice in hopes that you in fact were going for a cartoony style. Since this is just a first try at anthro I won't hound you about any sort of background. *yes this Critique fails

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~H8nLof Oct 10, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

I'm not a member so I can't write a Critique but I will say this is really good though you need to work on your proportions a little more

~nyan-husky Oct 10, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Thank you :3

~H8nLof Oct 10, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

no problem

~Lovablesh Oct 10, 2011

thats a furrie -3-

~nyan-husky Oct 10, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Mmf nigga

~Lovablesh Oct 10, 2011

It is. There is a difference between a furry and an anthro.

~nyan-husky Oct 10, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

:T its kinda the same thing

~Lovablesh Oct 10, 2011

no they are complete opposites! a furry is a human with fur and ears and tail and anthros are animals with human body parts

~ekb1999 Dec 19, 2011 Student Digital Artist

wait... wtf. then what you just said contradicts your previous statement.

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no they are complete opposites! a furry is a human with fur and ears and tail and anthros are animals with human body parts
you said it is a furrie at first... and then up here ^ you said it was an anthro... O.e

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